I would like everybody to know that lesson plans are being added gradually to the French Toast post, so please find a moment to check them out. I'll be posting them as soon as I get them.Some will be in the form of a link. Thanks.
We used
this powerful video to complete our unit on diary writing. Before writing we
got our creative juices flowing with the following…
Stop at
00:04 What is she running from? Why is she running? What thoughts are running
through her head at this point? Could you come up with a 3ed sentence to
describe to the reader how she is feeling? How about a feeling, description
sentence?
Stop at
00:06 Do a vocab boost to describe the woodlands. Similes, adjectives etc
Stop at
00:26 – What is going through her mind at this point? What choices does she
have? Why are the dogs/wolves chasing her? What has she done? Who do the dogs
belong to?
00:40 – How
come she can hold her breath for so long underwater?
0:50 – What
could the flashing lights be?
01:20 –
What could happen here? Why are the lights getting stronger?
01:41 – Is
she going to survive? If so, how will she survive? Does she have any
superpowers that will help her here? Make sure to look at and pause on all the
different scenes. This would be a chance for some more Alan Peat sentence work.
01:46 –
It’s a giant hand. Who does it belong to?
2:02 – What
is she thinking at this time? How is she feeling? What is this thing that has
saved her life? Why has it saved her life? How could we describe it?
2:50 – What happens next?
Good scaffolding work to get teenagers to write, as it could serve as a solid foundation for future writings.
This Friday's session is all about assessing writing. We'll be looking at what we should reward and penalise when a student puts pen to paper in an exam situation. To that end, here is a task, and some answers, which you should look at and decide on a mark out of 20.
The students were given these visual prompts and told to write the story in the past, and that they should choose a title for the story, beyond that no further instructions were given.
Answer 1:
Answer 2:
Answer 3:
Answer 4:
After you have graded the stories, give some thought to what it was that you valued and/or penalised and what made one better than the other. It should make for interesting discussion and will benefit the students when we come to mark the writing parts of the exams in December.
Find a nice a little story and put it up on the boardor here is where a FLIPCHART would come in handy, again!!By the way, there's plenty of A3 paper.
Children love to stand in front of the class. I would say that this could be the excuse to make children move around. It's a great form of learning vocabulary and word order.
I think the
French Roast animated video could lend itself really well to a lesson (or
several lessons) on basic screenwriting for theatrical/cinematic works.Of course, the ideal students of this type of
lesson would be those with near-advanced English writing skills who have a
special interest in this topic. After studying the elements and conventions of
an existing screenplay (and maybe also viewing a scene related to it),the class could begin a group project to create
their own screenplay forthe French
Roast piece.Perhaps each student could
choose (or be assigned) a part of the script for which they would have to
produce a text. (A typical screenplay/script has many parts; each with their
own standards, conventions and writing styles).For example, the
"Scene
Heading" and "Action" sections require descriptive writing which
sets a scene, its normallywritten in
"real time" with the active voice, in the present tense, etc... The
"Character Name" section is a description of the characters of the
film and their motivations.The
"Dialogue" section is the text that explain what the characters say
to each other, to themselves (as thoughts), what the narrator says, etc.. and
could be written from a variety of different perspectives, (first person, third
person omniscent, etc.).
Other ideas
are to have the students write to practice tenses..What happened to each of the
charcters just before/after they appeared in the film?What will happen to them?
Or,you
could challenge the students memory and motivate them through competition by
having them write (in groups) a description of everything that was on the
table, or hanging on the wall in the first scene, etc.
Students
could also try to stump each other by asking (in correctly written questions,
of course) the others, for example, "What color was the waiters
handkerchief?"
I think the
use of videos in class, especially silent ones, provide lots of lesson planning
opportunities, as well as a great change of pace for the class, that the
students also really enjoy.